Need Help With How To Start This Business Letter… Please Read On.?

Ok, say I was trying to sale a vending machine to the company where it is located. I have spoken with the office manager about it and have given him a price verbally over the phone. He asked me to put it into writing to submit to the corporate office. I just don’t know how to start this letter. What do I start with?
Dear Joe Blow,
In response to your request for a written price, here are the details of XYZ vending machine for $00.00
What would be the best! HELLLLLLLLP!
I greatly appreciate your time, any suggestions or tips! :)

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3 Responses to “Need Help With How To Start This Business Letter… Please Read On.?”

  1. JLR Says:

    That is actually a pretty good way to start off a follow up sales letter. You may want to add somewhere in the letter a thank you for meeting with you.
    You can get some tips on writing sales letters at the following:http://www.microsoft.com/smallbusiness/r…http://www.abusinessresource.com/Additio…http://www.onehourmarketing.com/public/d…

  2. Sels Says:

    Dear Joe Blow,
    I enjoyed our telephone conversation about supplying vending machines to Jim, Bob & Co. Pursuant to same, the following is the information you requested with regard to pricing:
    *******
    Tho, quite frankly, depending on how comfortable and casual your chat was, the opener you supplied would be fine.
    Good luck.

  3. July Says:

    Thank you for the opportunity to provide you with a written quote on the xyz vending machine…The price of the machine is ….Completion of the sale is subject to the following conditions…At your request, I would be happy to speak to your folks regarding the benefits of our proposal.

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